You always hurt the one you love
She didn't remember who told her this.. but then now she finally realised what it means and how it felt.. the pain.. the hurt.. the anger.. the disappointment .. the frustration.. and all the memories..
Why did it have to be now.. ?
Especially now... when she was moving on..
She knew her past would come back to haunt her.. Considering she had never had a closure from it.But then she thought that she had moved on..forgotten all about the past and had let go all of it.
But why did one single phone call change it all..
Why does it have to RAIN always when you are receiving a bad news.. ?
Rachel knew she had to face it all.. She had to tell Alice what had happened. Probably Alice would know what to do.
Later on that night she poured it all out to Alice .. Outside the rain and thunder continuing and Rachel was feeling much calmer now.She knew she had to listen to Alice's advice and call him up and speak to him face to face. Listen to and talk to him about things. And then yes finally she can move on.
YES!!!!!! She was now ready to face Sean .
YES, she would call him back and agree to meet him.. Hopefully this would be the last time.
The chance to explain why she ran away from him .. from her life at home.
P:S Sorry guys for not being quite regular on your blogs . Will catch up on them . Hope you all had a lovely valentine's day :)
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**But why did one single phone call change it all..
- Isn't it weird... How *one* thing prolly makes *the* difference at some point in life..?
And *rain*... It fits in so naturally, doesn't it? With happiness and anguish alike...
Good one! Waiting for the sequel...
Peace.
kalakki ani.....and we have been missing you sorely at WL...come back.....will i have to pray for rains for you to land there? he he...
back to the post...looks a lil incomplete daa....hope there are more parts...if yes, then intrestingly left....waiting for the next...maybe you wanted to keep it that way...but since you have built the entire thing so well...the flow suddenly gets cut out at the end...else its really an amazing attempt...keep writing...
beautiful Ani!
Its always 'one thing' that changes 'everything'.
:)
Keshi.
wd hv been a grt entry in the rain drenched contest of the lounge ....
Superbly expressed :)
kartz
hehe well it is..its always something small.. which turns out to be so important..
n yes.. rain fits in perfectly with all kinds of emotion..
Sandeep
hehe well thank u thank u..
did make my presence felt in WL yesterday night.. so gettin back into track must say..
i know..just didnt know how to end it..so left it at tht..
thats what my problem is.. oh well lets see.. am sure i will come up with something..
Keshi
Thank you dearie..
I know .. its so strange tht such small things make such big impacts..
Anurag
well the first part i had put it up for the contest.. thats how i started writing it..
just follow the hyper link on the post for RAIN and u'll find the first part.. :)
I liked this one .. short but full of emotions... :)
Pretty Me
Thank you :)
Not fair at all!
I'm so friggin curious to know what exactly is Rachel's problem!
Ani please, write the next part soon...long gaps on this story makes me curiouser (I'm not even sure this is a word!) :D
Still thinking..
sorry for leaving u hanging like tht.. hopefully i should be able to finish it quite soon..
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