Well this is a poem that I had posted on Writer's blog ..
Thought would post it on my blog as well.. Its on the universal subject .. Love...
If love is nothing but illusion of the heart
so let me live in this dream forever
let me believe still
that you and me
is we
Don't wake me up
I love to dream like that
Don't wake me up
I want to sing my song
Till the end of love
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ANI!? POEMS!
And u had to write on love :P
How abt some of those 'old' poems from u know who??? ;)
Buhahahahahaha!
Ani trying her hand at poems for the first time...well...u write well.. expecting more poems..all the best..
Have a nice weekend...
prethaa....
thats soooo mean.. lol.. those were written out of love.. or i was told like that..my foot..
and plz u want me to actually write them down.. err for that i need to find them.. hnnm anyways.. hehe its okk i guess.. lol..
well main love ke baare mai nahi likungi tho aur kisske baare main likungi yaar.. one subject that one can not figure out so easilyy
Rajesh..
err was that a poem.. reallyy lol dont think so.. just random thoughts.. am sure ppl must have already thought about these..
well its not much of a weekend.. its raining here.. and it supposed to be summer.. no comments about the weather..
Beautiful Ani, very hmmmm... (am a bit short of word here) :)
'Don't wake me up
I love to dream like that'
Now this is what I u'stand better about Love, always feels good in my dreams :p
Still thinking..
hehe thank u.. n yes this is an interpretation of what i think about love.. hehe one of them rather..
Well ur lines just reminded the song from Green day.. Wake me up when sept ends..
thats the best thing about dream.. there is no restrictions.. and its not reality.. so u r thoughts can have no limit.. n they are boundless..
hope u r dreaming a lot.. i think everyone should
LOVE-ly! :)
Not only Love, many other dreams I dun wanna wake up from...sometimes I feel my whole life is a dream, and that I'll be 'woken up' from it all soon...that I'll be dead.
Keshi.
hey ani..thats so cute..& since i'm in LOVEly mood these days..i like to read more n more abt this subject..
i simply loved the first ten lines of ur poem.. :)
SURPRISE!
that was very nice, ani..
haven't you heard what Chuang Tzu said
"am I dreaming of a butterfly
or a butterfly dreaming of me"
live the dream!
wishes..
MIP
That was really sweet.. you do sound like Juliet.. :D! you should post more poems
Suhani..
isnt my poem only ten lines long??
hehe
even i am also in the all LOVEyy mood.. hehe but then what to do.. just sit and dreamm about things.. thats all..
MIP
well when ppl around are posting poems left .. right and centre.. i thought..i would give it a shot.. thats all..
hehe so is it good ???
Anu
hehe well lets sayy.. i just sound like juliet..
no chance of becoming one.. err atleast in the near future.. hehe :)
about posting more.. this itself took sometime.. err days to think over.. hehe am not tht great man to get it out of the blue..
it was really good...
try some YO-Yo..make a View Master, jot a 'notapoem'...a writer's life is never out of choices and fun..
MIP
Hi Ani
Know something? too blog like u
P.S: Wondering the reason for the above statement????...well..jus to tel u that it's been a while since u visited my blog :)
It’s from one of my 4 year old writings. It’s the 21st century poem which I found by chance from my archieved emails a few hours before reading this post.
I don’t have a Cadillac.
I don’t have a Boeing 767.
My shoes are punctured along with my heart,
Walking through the thorns and stones to reach you there when you are 600,000 miles apart.
The mummies of the dragon empire, welcome to the 21st Centuary love!
MIP
Thank you so much.. will definitly try one of these days.. well sky is the limit isnt it.. ;)
Rajesh
hehe dont read in between the lines for the blog.. there is nothing much to it..
well i did leave a comment.. even though i was late.. u didnt seem to have noticed it.. :)
Shajii,
that was such a cool poem..
Walking through the thorns and stones to reach you there when you are 600,000 miles apart.
well isnt everyone walking through thorns and stones.. to keep the relationship going.. it just signifies the downs of the relationship..
When you don’t have an Airplane or a Rolls Royce how do you reach your destiny? Cos the destiny might have been that difficult without these formalities. So, you can only walk, and by that time you walk 600,000 miles and reach your destiny then there you will find ’25 Minutes – MLTR song’ is the right choice, rather than what you wanted. My poem implied how difficult certain things might turn at last, to explain how much someone at times need to stay away intentionally for reasons.
Shajii
the 25 minutes is sooo apt a song.. because.. love is all about taking chances.. and it consists about all ifs and buts..
Hmm the was a beautiful poem.
Good one ani...
Jus wanted to share this with you..
The beat quotes i ever read on love is a forward I got, I don remember that exactly, Some eight year old kids were asked to tell whats love,
The answers they gave are amazing and far better than the grown ups perception of love,
Love is when my mommy for my daddy makes coffee and takes a sip to check if the sugar is enough..
Love is when you go to eat with your friend and your friend gives all of his french fries to you, inspite of he liking it,
Love is when my grandpa paints my granny toes, inspite of his arthiritis, because she couldnt bend and do it.
Love is when my mommy gives me the best chicken piece..
At times, love is like the ghost which everybody talks about but only few have seen...
Loved your poem
Ria
thank you so much..
Barath
thank you so much..
and that poems by the kids are so lovely.. its really cute what kids come up with it.. and they have such simple meanings about things.. and its so nice..
thank u once again..
let me know when u publish that post :)
Keshi.
Keshi
I have published it now.. so let me know what you think .. :)
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